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September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved your update, it was nice to see Iruka stand-up for himself (and his friend) even if it is against Kakashi! Tsunade was a little infuriating but I liked how you redeemed her, it's nice that the hokage would be so protective of her shinobi. I hope we get to see the lunch with Genma I can't wait to see how Kakashi tries to behave himself :) But for now I feel so sorry for both of them actually it'll be nice when this jutsu finally wares off, I guess were just going to have to deal with a little angst till then!
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know even if you take a while to update your chapters are so long who can complain? I love it Raidou redemed himself in my eyes. If it wasn't me i got a little suspicious when Kakashi was talking to Obito and his sensei, iruka was close and he used the word want a lot...the something happened to him? Am i reading to much into this or will it come back? either way wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed it
ps. don't mind my spelling please.
ps. don't mind my spelling please.
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I lurve your story. My heart just melts a little more on each chapter. It's the most kawaii(cute) story ever. Thank you so much for updating it really made my day to see your story there. Can't wait to read more! Please if it's not too much trouble could you email me when you have updated? I would just die of happiness. Thankies again for a great story. It really just makes me smile and warms my heart. Luv~teddybomber ^_^
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanna know who all is in the Iruka Protection Brigade too. Oh but Tsunade's gonna be pissed when she hears about Iruka sneaking away to Kakashi. Hopefully she won't find out until the jutsu wears off. I like Raidou's reasoning like this, it makes sense and he doesn't become a total jerk (and now he can be an ally).
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Not sure what you had planned before concerning Raido, but I like how you wrote it. Although when I first read that he was taking care of Iruka, I was a bit nervous; glad to see he turned out to be a good guy-and I feel sorry for him. Tsunade pissed me off though, it was great to see Iruka take the initive to sneak out and see Kakashi. I do get this feeling that something bad is going to happen before our couple finally lives happily ever after, it just seems that everything is coming together too smoothly too early. Can't wait to see what happens next, hope real life let's you update soon. :)
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww kakashi and iruka are so kawaii ^_^
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that Raidou isn't going to be a horrible guy plus I think your right about this giving them a much better history, I just like him too much and now I feel a bad that he doesn't have anyone.
I can't believe Tsunade would do that but at the same time I can understand, it's a legitimate concern although I don't think she has to be so harsh about it! Poor Kakashi, all sad and heartbreaking but at least now it he knows that Iruka is making the decision himself, not because Kakashi wants him to, it's also nice to see Raidou in on the plans. I thought Iruka was utterly adorable just showing up, being so proud of himself for being 'super-sneaky' I loved that. Another great chapter, it's nice to see you updating again ^_^
I can't believe Tsunade would do that but at the same time I can understand, it's a legitimate concern although I don't think she has to be so harsh about it! Poor Kakashi, all sad and heartbreaking but at least now it he knows that Iruka is making the decision himself, not because Kakashi wants him to, it's also nice to see Raidou in on the plans. I thought Iruka was utterly adorable just showing up, being so proud of himself for being 'super-sneaky' I loved that. Another great chapter, it's nice to see you updating again ^_^
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the Raidou you decided to go with. Sad for his choices, but it shows what a good person he is. Iruka is simple and sweet, Kakashi is earnest and angsty and sweet. I am looking forward to how you will evolve the story. I was thinking, wouldn't it be sweet (cough***hot***cough)if Iruka had to initiate a sexual encounter...had to explain everything he wa- oops, needed to Kakashi... ...
OK, I'm back - and you are probably already have the plot for the next chapter. Can't wait to read it!
OK, I'm back - and you are probably already have the plot for the next chapter. Can't wait to read it!
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read the chapters again - still like it and still looking forward to the next chapter. I get the warm fuzzies each time I read this story.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is so cute! They're relationship is progressing so nicely!... so much so that i'm really afraid that this is just the calm before the storm. ^_^ This was really well written, and definitely one of my favorites. I can't wait for more! Please update soon!