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I get back from a two week vacation w/no internet, and find a new story posted by you. I really like this one and the plot, very original. There are little elements in the story that I really enjoyed, like Pakkun making an apperance. I also like how hesitant Kakashi is. I don't think I've read a story where he starts out not knowing if he's into guys, his confusion and growing feels for Iruka are very cute. Iruka is very well written also and I like that he's the aggressor in this, even if it is in a shy little manner. Hope this is another mulit-chapter fic b/c I'm really looking forward to see where this is going. Update soon :)

Oh my goodness! I love your story!!! I wasn't sure at first when I read the summary, but once I got past the part where Kakashi realized what he did was wrong, my heart was just captured! I love the long chapters and am hoping you update quickly. I apologize for the nudge, but I really can't wait to read the rest of the story. I agree that telling Iruka to have sex would have been rape, those kind of stories just make me sad. your's is so touching and sweet, with just the right amount of intimacy.

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I love this story its so fuckin cute! XD

I'm really enjoying this fic. Wonderful story and this Iruka is so cute! I also love the interaction between the characters. Keep up the good work!

wow, your story is amazing, very well written. i am expecting a third chapter soon. please keep up the good work.

this fic is great ^^ I read that doujinshi and I agree with you, I really like this version much better
your writing style is really nice to read if you know what I mean.

That was really sweet. I like this story, the whole plot is a great idea.

So nice to see you posting another story I always like what you have to write and this is no different! I have to admit at first that I was so mad at Kakashi for taking advantage of the situation but then when you had him work threw everything and realize what he was doing, it turned out really great :)
I also like that you had Raidou as the past love, it's nice to see people try something different not just the same exes over and over, although I'm a little torn because actally i love the idea of rai/iru as a couple so I don't want Raidou to be a bad guy. I also think it's cute how Kakashi seems to be the one who's unsure, it's usually Iruka that's the shy hesitant one. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how he progresses through the jutsu and I can't wait to read more ^_^

Aaaaah... I loved this when I read it first on the KakaIru lj community. Not only is it well-written, but the idea is fresh and clever. We need more jutsu accidents! I liked your Kakashi. He's written just lovely. So hum-hum but curious, reluctantly dutiful, all manipulative bastardy then overwrought with the guilts. Great fun. It's interesting to see Iruka so vacant, a null person defined only by the thoughts and reflections of others. Looking forward to seeing how you bring him around into the real world again. (oh, and for the NC17 stuff as well. Can't forget that. *grin* Take your time, I love build-up of words and characters you've got going on!)

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this is the best!! I cant wait to read more of it <3