rate_review Reviews

wow. depressing. but really good, you made me like a character that i usually think of as an annoying-little-bitch-who-devoted-herself-pointlessly-to-an-emo-bastard-cuz-of-his-looks-who'll-get-dumped-again-and-again-and-refuses-to-acknowledge-she'll-never-get-him-and-refuses-to-accept-the-person-who-actually-loves-her,-though-i-think-naruto-just-is-all-over-her-because-he's-trying-to-cover-up-his-love-for-sasuke-cuz-im-a-big-yaoi/sasunaru-fangirl-even-tho-some-ppl-think-it's-disgusting-and-i-think-you-get-my-point. but he story made me like her, or at least pity her. huh. also don't bash me for sakura bashing, i apologize, she just infuriates me and i meant nothing personal by it. yea.

also, since this is th first story to make me like sakura, you are obligated to continue it. NARUTO!! GIT OVER HERE!!!! UNLEASH YOUR WORST PUPPY-POUT IN YOU LIFE!!!!



NOW UPDATE GRAH!

though this was okay and all...it was just that there were soo many mistakes in the sentences and in the spelling that made it kind of confusing to read.

this was very nice...good work looking forward to more fics

Nice, I think you've set up a catchy beginning.
I'm not sure where you're going with it, but your writing's great, and I'd like to see a few more chapters! =D

This story is good the way it is as a one shot. I don't really think you need to go into it further. Having her move on and leave all her hang ups behind is a strong move and will be good for her... although, considering he has her pick of any ivory school in the country, one would think that she'd be leaving the area soon anyway, so where the hell is she headed now?

can't wait to see where this is going!!

One-shot? =( *uses my best puppy dogs eyes. No, wait... grabs Kakashi*

"Kakashi? Give zell-chan puppy dog eyes."

*Kakashi unleashed his ultimate puppy dog eyes, and slightly sexy pout*

Bwahahaha... now you will HAVE to update. Well, I enjoyed the story. Thank you for posting it!