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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ooh goody another Naruto fic by you!! You have a great writing style and I loved the way you wrote Walking Corpse, the plot was unexpected and the character development very interesting!!
I see that this story is also going to be great and I already can't wait to see what happenes. Again I didn't expect the story and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop it! Loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, so easily falling back into working together!!
Off to read the next chapter now ^_^
I see that this story is also going to be great and I already can't wait to see what happenes. Again I didn't expect the story and I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop it! Loved the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, so easily falling back into working together!!
Off to read the next chapter now ^_^
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December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You've got to love Itachi's sense of humour and personality even though he's an evil son of a ***** ^_^
So Naruto and Sasuke going to be working together for a while, Tsunade should have trusted Naruto. Mind you this needed to happen for the story to continue, I think. Wonder what else is going to happen, those two are really a force to reckon with when together!!
I hope you update soon, dying to read more ^_^
So Naruto and Sasuke going to be working together for a while, Tsunade should have trusted Naruto. Mind you this needed to happen for the story to continue, I think. Wonder what else is going to happen, those two are really a force to reckon with when together!!
I hope you update soon, dying to read more ^_^
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You definately caught my interest with this story. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Itachi is making a fundamental mistake too - underestimating his opponents. Great job. More please!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So deliciously exciting! I love your writing style, it's keeping me in suspense! The tension in your story is almost tangible, like I can taste when Naruto will suddenly explode.
I love how you portrayed the characters and how you made Naruto and Sasuke interact with eachother. I can tell this will be an ecxiting story!
Please update soon :)
I love how you portrayed the characters and how you made Naruto and Sasuke interact with eachother. I can tell this will be an ecxiting story!
Please update soon :)
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. So far. But I have faith in you.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your writng style please update soon. I really enjoyed Walking Corpse. Looking forward to the next update.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story.
I really like the idea that Naruto is strickly working with Naruto because he had given his word. Sasuke is going to get more than he's barged for, thats for sure. ^^
I really like the idea that Naruto is strickly working with Naruto because he had given his word. Sasuke is going to get more than he's barged for, thats for sure. ^^
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so good!!! Definitely will be on the lookout for an update :-)
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please, please continue. I'm so glad you got bitten again after finishing Walking Corpse. This was a fabulous beginning and I can't wait to see the awesome you make of it. Wonderful!