AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Repercussions

by manicandyshumway

schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
New OTP.

But seriously, this is the hottest thing I've read in a very, VERY long time. Thank you so much for writing it.
person JGoddess
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great read! I liked very much the portrayal and chemistry between Jiraiya and Hinata. It's an unusual couple, but I can totally see it happening as you wrote it. My favorite part is how JIraiya seduced Hinata, it was very OC, him being firm, gentle and a pervert in general. A little detail though, it's "Pacience", not "Patients.". Any chances for a sequel?
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whooopppss! I love this story! Please continue, it's soooooo hard to find good Jiraiya stories... he's HOT! You are a very good writer!!!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so.. whens the next chpt?
person roxnroll
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Busted!!! That was cute. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Rox