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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i want to read more lemons between Naruto and the wolf demon, so hurry up and update!
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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is not very well-written. You are being way too technical and straightforward when you talk about sexual things. It ends up being very UNsexy. Also you need more dialoge, and it would help if you gave us insight into what the characters are thinking
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow sakuras life musta sucked
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so what happened to Kyuubi? Wouldn't he be a fox demon of some sort? I like it! Continue Soon!
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG That's soooo hot. Please update soon, I have to know what happens next.
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was disguisting and sick and thats all i have to say
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August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whole lotta things wrong with this story. But the first would be, where's kyuubi in all of this? I can't see that he'd stand by and let all this happen without a fight. Even Naruto wouldn't just give in without a fight. Second, where the hell did the other demon come from and why was he allowed to 'play' with with the wolf demon's new toy? Especially to take Naruto's 'virginity'. It's absurd.
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uhh.........no!
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August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was totally gross. I mean I'm all for male/male but you made it sick. The stuff where Naruto transforms into some kind of hermaphrodite/antro thing was the final straw. Really, try to put a little more class into the stories you right, for the sake of the rest of us.