rate_review Reviews

I gotta say that at times, you remind me of Mojo-jojo. you say one thing, then say it again, then say it again wording it differently each time. This makes some of the denser parts of the story boring, and takes alot away from it.

other than that this is a great story, and i look forward to the chapters too come.

nice. cool. love hinata/naruto their a great couple!!

cool

baaaaa cliffy. good story though, more plot to it then most of the stuff out there.

put out the next chapter please this is just well heh funny and good nice plotline i have to say the 'any thing prize' was funny as hell hes just rubbing the back of his head thinking the whole image is full of humor thank you for this it really brightened a otherwise very very bad day ^_^

I really love how Ino and Sakura wanted to bang Naruto but im glad they realised Hinata needs him more then they do. I kinda wonder what Naruto wanted as a prize and what took Ino so long? Please update soon i love this story!

this is good! looking forward to more

LOL, great chapter! Nice fight scene, some of it could have been explained better, but overall it was still great for those of us with terribly active imaginations (I wonder...lol). I think it would have been awesome if Naruto would have been trying to say "I'd like you to hook me up with Hinata" or something like that, when Ino cut him off by using her mind transfer technique, that would have been freaking hilarious, and if Ino can read memories and stuff like that while using that technique, imagine how stupid she would feel!! LOL, oh well, I can't wait for your next chapter and thank you for addressing me like you did in your chapter, I appreciate that. 'Till next time!

cool. please update
rox

This is like vengeance and pie, 'So good' >:)