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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story/porno, but wat fics are they from you seem to be a great writer, from ff.net. your favorite pairings seem to be similer to mine naru/yugito, naru/fembiju' naru/femkyuubi[favorite] naru/yukie, naru/femhaku. Love naruto chronicles
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, which story are these from again?
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your grammar needs serious work. And it would help if you were more descriptive and didn't rush through the scenes so fast. This was, to be honest, below average. Well, let me amend that: Below average as far as decent writing goes, but actually above average as far as the majority of fanfiction is concerned. It's a sad fact how horrid most fanfiction writers are.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's your penname for FF.net because I would like to read the stories your lemons come from.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good
A few grammar errors here & there
I think it would just be better if you add'd your stories here with the lemons intact
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August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe it's me again hey that was pretty cool. update sson i hope you read mine hehe gomen