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for Tainted Ramen

by MoveThemHands

schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I couldn't quit laughing at the end with the part about the crowd. Pretty good with the details about the threesome.

Kudos!

~BL
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*mega nosebleed* that was the hottest thing I ever read. But, the other part........
THAT WAS FUNNY!

I could not belive that they had sex on kakashi's table and to make it worse, everyone including the fangirls got to see them and now they feel worse.

This was half hot and funny.

You are super with this story and hope you make more
Darkblood XD
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it, I hope you finish.

P.S.:
It's alright of the recommended thing, I got it so it's alright.
-_~
person kaiden
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it´s good, just one thing they allways need stretching, for prostate stimulation. unless you are a masochist.
bye keep it like that!!!
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG how embarrassing!! But HOTTTT!
person Tamyka
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This isn't bad at all. You're threesome was well picked and I love the idea you have with it. I'd like to see another chapter. At least an aftermath of how everyone will react now. You did a good job...spcially if its your first. Congrats! Ja ne!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Just... *stares at chapter and drools* .... Hn? What? Oh. You want me to say what I thought of it huh? Well... Lemme just say, I didn't just die once. Or twice. Not even three times. Oh, I died at least ten times due to either blood loss or drowing in my own drool. trust me, neither way is a fun way to go.

But at least I died happy!

I so love you! Oh good Lord... The visions I have in my head right now... X3
person despairs
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrr...ever since i read this really awesome story of yours i've been craving MORE SaiNaru lol. And then i went and read the manga 308 (again) where Sai stops Sasuke from stickin Naruto with his weapon (ok that sounds kinky but i didnt mean for it to haha)Even tho Sai ticks me off by insulting Naru's privates (ukes can be hung too dang it) i still think they make a cute pair. Anywho...i just wanted to say THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing such a good story and i'm happy you decided to add Sai in it too.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good god....if I can get my nose to stop bleeding enough....there...omg that was hot!!! it was everthing I had hoped for and more. More Sai/Naru/Sasu please!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I loved it. So funny. Haha sai didn't care if he was nude, so like Sai. ;P
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