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for Tainted Ramen

by MoveThemHands

schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The longest chapter ever but I thouroughly enjoyed every second of it XD
HEy thanks for having me in mind while writing it!!!
I was just thinking to myself the whole time I was reading... they should get caught.... they are in the middle of a ramen shop having full on hot butt sex...... and guess what THEY DID!!!!!
I love it! Good work on the threesome!! IT was muy bueno!
K Thanks
XDDDDDDDDD
person despairs
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmfao...it just figures Sai would be the one that didnt care if anyone saw him nude or not.
Imagine him walking butt naked thru the village holding his scroll lol that's both hot and funny!
Great job...i'm gonna go read it again :D
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it sounds like great nasty fun! I love Sai and Sasuke together and adding in Naruto can't be anything but finger lickin' good....Mmm. Mmm. Hope you update soon!
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well i hope u continue it looks set to be really good
great job so far
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I SO FUCKING LOVE YOU!!! Do you know how long I have been waiting for a Sasu/Naru/Sai story??? I FEEL ANCIENT!!! hahaha please update soon! I can't wait hehe.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I love it so far! Keep going! Oh, I love giving you ideas when I'm being a smart-ass trying to get a laugh outta you. *fan-girl squee* YAY! Three-way! Whoo!
person Dragon7
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!:) I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG You are doing the 3 some!!!!!!! I told you threesome would be nice!!! Since I can't do this from the convo anymore I am doing here...... *whips Sara* Update!!!!!

Aww I'm sorry that was mean..... *Tackles and licks*