schedule
December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAWWWW this story is soooo great!! Please tell me you will continue it! Where are the new chapters?! The only advice I can give you is to ask for a beta to look over your grammar mistakes, and present/past tense mistakes. Jeez but I love your story!! Don't stop here!I know I'm repeating myself but damned.
schedule
April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dispised yuji and the council. i hope manda will eat them hahahhahaha. well, this fic is really really great. please update soon. id love to read the next chappie. ow, what about deidara and naruto? is the council trying to force naruto to give birth to another uchiha as to repopulate the uchiha clan?? will manda eat them???? huh? huh? tell me bout the farts Ü go saineji and kibashika!!! so cool.. <3<3<3
schedule
January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I've just read your story and am excited for the next one! im really liking it so far although i have to say im apprehensive about how your going to tie diedara and naruto as brothers, and what their purpose is... yu-chan makes me smile! your writing style is really good as well, a FEW spelling errors but nothing critical that takes away from the story! good job and im looking forward for the next chapter!
schedule
January 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!
^.^
^.^
schedule
January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't Wait to read more of this story!!!!!!!!
schedule
December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know you want to post more. Pretty please?
schedule
October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... so good. The scene between their little family was so beautiful. Interesting about the curse mark... I should have seen it coming, but to be honest, I was surprised. It's awesome though that he trusted Naruto that much... of course, trust might imply sharing that information, but who knows!
Can't wait for the next.
Can't wait for the next.
schedule
October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Neji and Sai are sooooo CUTE in this fic! *squeals* I love it!!! Update soon!
schedule
October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww such a cute family moment to bad it won't last, but it was a nice moment. i really liked it. i can't wait til the next update.
schedule
October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very suspenseful story. I like it a lot. Keep it up!