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by CrimsonAngelRath

schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*twitch**twitchtwitch* you know what, i don't even really like this. well... i like the plot, but i'm not a huge fan of the style. I WANNA KNOW WHAT'S GOING OOOOOOOON!!!!! itaxdei, i was not expecting that. actually, i was not expecting itaxanybody, cuz i was told in chapter 1 or 2 that he was DEAD! but this is okay. i like people randomly coming back to life! ^_^ please update, because i actually do want to know what happens.~
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. What will Sasuke do now that Nartuo has refuse to let Yuji know of his Uchiha heritage and what jutsu did Sasuke use on Naruto that's killing him now? Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so much stuff happened that it made my head spin. i am a crazy chick like that so you know i love the loop de loops and this story is full of them. i just have one big question is the uchihas packin the power sprem or what to knock up the dudes. now i know why their clan was so large. did itachi use the same jitsu on deidra that sasuke used on naruto. or are they able to naturally (whatever works) make males pregnant. i also love the itachi showing up with the pregnant deidra. when itachi mentions hatred and jealousy did that have something to do with leadersama, the shark man (can't spell his name right), or pein. is itachi fighting over deidra from either pein or leadersama. is naruto just that easy to get pregnant because of kuubyi or something else making him get pregnant every time him and sasuke have sex. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
person Kurai Kisu
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a really good story. By the by aren't the names Rath and Thatz referring to Dragon Knights? I really like that manga. Oh well I also like this story so when is Sasuke gonna realize that Naruto is pregnant again? Is someone gonna die? I wanna know! Update real soon please?? Oh and Yuji is so adorable please allow Naruto to be able to have the other. It would be so cute to read about Yuji being a big brother.
person _Kinkey-Kitsune_
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG that chapie woz jus amazing please please please please update soon pppppppppplllllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person jess
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit... this is freakin intense!!! ahhhh! poor naruto! he is always in so much pain! evil fucking uchia! sasuke needs to be nicer. *sigh* i like the kid, he's sweet! all the pairing are fun. ^_^ I really can't wait for more! what is up the sasuke? it's all so mysterious! thank you so much! write more soon please! i love you! *HUG*
person Damp
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes I know, It's a bit late to say "Wow! I Love your story! Please continue it!!" at the first chappie being as it is the fifth chappie. . . .

But ANYWAYS!! I can still say this! I love where the story is going, it's a bit fast for my taste, but never the less, it's still a good read!!

-Damp *Can't wait for you next installment! *
person Anon
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh,oh! Naruto's in trouble! And what will he do when Sasuke finds out that he used sex to get answers out of him and report them to the counsel? Naruto has definitely screwed up now! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!..I love where this story is heading...I really wanna know what the hecj
happen with Neji, and what's up with Kiba and Shikamaru...ooooh
and about Naruta and Sasuke..sooo coool...keep up the good work

YA NE
person 1231
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
could naruto be pregnant again?