schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm I like this story, update soon.
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like the start of this story. I take it Sasuke is the father?? I can't wait to hear the rest of the story. What did he do to Naruto 5 years ago? Hope you get your reviews soon, so I can read more :)
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I like what you've got so far so keep up the good work, I'm sure others would love to know how this continues as well :)
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amaaaaaaaazing, I love it! I can't wait!
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have the beginnings of a good story here keep it up... you may want to read through it before you post next time though
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story ohhhhhh is yu chan sukes baby ahhhhhh is he is he when does suke find oiug hahahaha its gonns be fdun seeing suke live with naruto and yu chan priceless i cant wait for more
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Great start. I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update. can't wait to read more of this story.
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its alright(nothing different from any other fic like this that I had read in the past), though try editing your work before posting, it helps a lot and looks more appealing to the readers eye.
schedule
August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm i like this story. But i was wondering. Do you need a beta? I would love to do it if you did!!!!!
Dace
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Dace
zeppsa@hotmail.com