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by Glenndolyn

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Ibiki stories... but Iruka was... most gay men are not flamers, effeminate bitches... I'll admit there are some, but it's the exception not the rule. Your portrayal of Ibiki was very good, perhaps if you paired him with a stronger willed character.
person Hestia
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I love Ibiki stories!! So good!!
person DoeEyedSamurai
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WWWWOOOOOOOOWWWWWW U CAN REALLY WRITE AN AMAZING SEX SCENE WWWWWWOOOOOOOOWWWWWW IS ALL IMLEFT SAYING UR GREAT AND THIS STORY HAS LEFT ME SPEECHLESS.
person DoeEyedSamurai
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is there anyway you could write a story for me i would absolutely adore u for it if u do just email me thanx
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG yeah yeah yeah that was great. I love your writing. If you have any thought toward it I think you could be a pro. writer. Your style and word use are great. Thanks for sharing with us.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never been so aroused from a fic in my entire life. I bow to you. I bow to you. You are god.
person eve4mem
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You two are the best when it comes to uke Iruka!! I love his neediness and how he's not afraid to get it all. You two need to do more it's all so wonderful!
person david_holmes
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That...was.... FLAMIN'... HOTTTTTT... and if I could use expletives to let you know just how HOT that was, I would. Damnnnnnn...

Never in a million years did I ever imagine that Ibiki x Iruka would be so... WHOA....

I was so caught up in the crazily erotic moment that I forgot this was even Naruto....


Excuse me while I *seriously* go change undergarments...@__________________@
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was amazing. Thank you.
person Zigana
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!