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O.O wow......that was hot. Never really thought about Ibiki...but now....damn....that was hot. And with Iruka too. ::gives you all the cookies in the world:: I guess it's safe to say I loved it, neh? ^^;;

holy SHIYT! yes, that 'y' was deliberate. how the hell did you manage to produce this fic? that was just amazing, great smut but also with really, really good plot and character devlopment. hats off to you!

I loved how deliciously sexy you made Ibiki, honestly the whole thing was rather hot enough to melt my brain!
I find sometimes dirty talk can be a real love/hate thing with me, it can come across as demeaning and uncaring and at first when Ibiki was calling Iruka a whore i almost stopped reading. But then you showed that wasn't really what he wanted and that he really did have a caring side, to actually get to see Ibiki's emotions was wonderful!
This was an absolutely fabulous piece of smut and the only thing that would have made it perfect would have been if Ibiki had used the vibrator on himself ;) anyway i hope you do write this pair again, the chemistry you created between them was perfect!

I just love this pairing! Wonderful smut, with a good amount of emotion thrown in, thank you for that. Ibiki is a complicated character and doesn't get enough love. I like that you made him self-conscious about his scars. Forcing the honesty out of Iruka was a new take, but made sense given that he knew all about Mizuki. I also like that your Mizuki loved Iruka, in his own insane way, instead of being the usual cruel user. Nicely done. Thanks for posting this.

So Incredibly hot!!

cdk

DAMN that was hot!!
DAMN!!
you have got to write more.....please!
maybe with a jelous(sp?) kakashi!