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for Konoha Café

by ResurgereTento

person Minako
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Naru-chan is definetly a shota-type! You must continue this masterpiece!
schedule August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YES! YES! YES! MOAR! I completely love this! TEN POINTS! YOU WIN!
person S_R
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Little Naru-chan's so cute. I felt sorry for him though, being pushed around constantly.
I can't wait to see the main part of the story, update soon ^^
person noezel7
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I like where this story is headed. I've never really seen a story with Naruto working in a host club before and who doesn't like Ouran? Can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a big fan of Ouran high school host club so yayyyyy ^_^ i love how jiraiya couldent see naruto as his sign but his mind is way to procupied with boobs anyway. I personally didint notice any mistakes and i cannot wait for you to update!
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Not all stories are exciting right away, and every story has boring parts to it. Your story does show signs of great potention, and i am very glad to hear about the time jump, also the way you seem to be doing it seems very well done. Look at Harry potter. The prologue starts with him as a baby then jumps 10 years forward, so it can be possible as long as done well. ^.^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter and hope this will push you into getting those creative juicing flowing. Don't want you too feel like your force out a story, it never turns out as well as if it were just flowing out of you. :) Good luck!
person sailior12
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story it really drew me in qiuck i cant wait for more
person beautifullove348
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I clicked this story kinda figuring it would be another cliche college fic with a cafe.

I was proven wrong.

Any story that has a beginning that nicely written has just got to be amazing. I already know I am going to absolutely love this story. Your descriptions, writing style and all around how you started off your story, is just absolutely superb. You don't get many writers that can get me this impressed and worked up only after a prologue. I love it. I want to enourage you majorely to update soon! You've got talent babe ;) Trust me, I will be a reviewer of every chapter. Good luck!