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PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next.

very cool can't wait for next chapter.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON. It is a good story. You should put some sexual things in soon.

well. um... this has an interesting plot. i want to know what happens, but i'm not real "in to" your style. the chapters can't be more than a page long, and the abrupt change of pov and back was odd. you could certainly find better ways so that it flows more smoothly. if you would like, i can try to help you, but it's rather difficult when i can't sit and explain what i mean directly to you.~

Alright... Good story. You have really short chapters though, can't be more that one page in Word. Please, try to make them longer. It's no fun reading stories with this little chapters. Anyway, great plot. I've never seen it before^-^

OMG!

I know, I know, when there´s a hold up at a bank you don´t laugh and you´re not suppose to be smiling like an idiot. But that´s what I´m doing right now as I was reading this. Sorry, hope you aren´t offended! But, sheesh, that was so funny!

Good fic, can´t wait for the next installment.

-Damp *Please make your chapters longer...*

This is really, really good when you update again please make the next chapters longer.

Venny: Yea, know. She -points to Vivi- /wasn't/ going to reveiw. But I -points to himself- talked her into it! It was short sure, -shrugges- but I still liked it! Please, please, don't have Sasuke be the one to rape poor Naruto-chan!!!

Vivi:.....Hey, don't say it as if I'm such a mean person, and that I don't like it too. I just.....didn't feel like reveiwing it right now, is all. I actually like SasuNaru, ItachiXNaruto, and ItachiXSasukeXNaruto/ItachiXNarutoXSasuke. But I don't like the idea of Sasuke raping Naruto. I can see it better as Itachi raping Naruto, than Sasuke doing it. Plus, I like SasukeXNaruto the best!

Venny: So, we reveiwed, don't cry!

Vivi:...She never said she was going to cry......right?

Venny: YOU CAN MARRY ME!!!!!!!!!

Vivi:....Stop it.

Venny: And if you don't swing that way; you can have Vi-

Vivi: Finish that, and I'll fucking kill you. Unlike some people I know -cough-Venny-cough- /I/ don't sell myself.

BOTH: SO, YEA. WHAT WE'RE TRYING TO SAY IS THAT WE'D LOVE IT IF YOU'D CONTINUE!!

Ja ne,

~Vivi & Venny

You are sick! These cliffhangers feel literally falling off a cliff. More I say! more! You certainly know how to keep someone's attention.

poor naruto...anyway I like the story so far but the chapters are really short..still good though and I hope to read more :)