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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* "please mr. bank robber sir.." I have a feeling were about to get to the good part *_-
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this story!!! I wanna read more!!!! PLEASE update soon!
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol the was really funny too short but really funny.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mrew.... *bouncing in seat* not bad.. not bad at all. I can't wait to see what you have planned next. ^_~
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
has a great start please continue
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I'd like to read more. I hope that you can update soon! ^^
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The only thing you are doing wrong with this fic is.....making it sooooo damn short!!!!>_< This fic is so original, I never read a fic like it lol and I love it so much right now, please do update okay!!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow cant wait to read more hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol. I was thinking, "oh shit. the Popo's are here! 5-0 5-0!" heehee.
anyway, poor Naruto. he was taken hostage used to keep the other patrons at bay...and for pervo stuffs.
please continue. with longer chapters please!
anyway, poor Naruto. he was taken hostage used to keep the other patrons at bay...and for pervo stuffs.
please continue. with longer chapters please!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, 2 things....
1-- your story has a great plot but, there should be more detail about the who, what, where, and when.
2-- please make your chapters longer.....your story is really good but your teasing all of us with the short chapters!!!!
update soon!!
1-- your story has a great plot but, there should be more detail about the who, what, where, and when.
2-- please make your chapters longer.....your story is really good but your teasing all of us with the short chapters!!!!
update soon!!