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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is really good. I like it. Could you make the updates a little longer though? It's a great story, I can't wait to read more. Update soon please.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Naruto!
This story is really good, but can you maybe make the chapters a little longer? If not, that's ok. I just wanna read more hehe! ^^
Update soon!
This story is really good, but can you maybe make the chapters a little longer? If not, that's ok. I just wanna read more hehe! ^^
Update soon!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please write more in your next update. Its too short for me. Its like those damn samples at the store you like the taste but its not enough to satisfy you. In other words I LIKE YOUR STORY I WANT MORE!!!
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These chaps are short, but i'm curious about the plotline. I can't wait to see what else you have in store. Update soon.
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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like your story so much. I can not not wait until the next chapter but, can you make the next chapter longer.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. Can you make the chapter longer.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was so mean!!
way to leave us hanging there!!
your story has a great start and i can't wait to read more!!
way to leave us hanging there!!
your story has a great start and i can't wait to read more!!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, I'm excited. Sasuke and Itachi as criminals? It's too cute! Is it too much to ask for some Uchihacest? just a teaspoon full.... My doctor prescribed it to me. "at least one teaspoon of Uchihacest everyday, three times a day," he said. I overdose, but don't tell him that. heehee. that might explain why I'm so addicted to it.
but I digress. Naruto is so cute. I hope your next chapter is longer!
but I digress. Naruto is so cute. I hope your next chapter is longer!
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot and it's so short I look forward to your next chapter