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for With One Last Growl

by dengrymme

person sdf
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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person Anon
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I review as I read.)
O.O Right off the bat, eh? . . . XD “Going for hours.” XD . . . “Yeah, that was nice.” I guess that would be one way of putting it. XD . . . Seckseeee. ^_^ . . . I always like to picture what Sasuke would be like teaching someone. It’s a neat idea. Ever read “Teamwork” by Asuka Kureru? The sequel has something on that. ^^ . . . I guess he didn’t want to just cuddle. X) . . . Whoops. “That it easy, teme.” You mean “Take it easy,” right? . . . Heh, it’s kind of hard not to think about sex while holding that, Naruto. ^^ . . . And there’s the title. Curious title, by the way, but nice all the same. ^_^
Strange habit, Naruto. . . . Oh cool, Sasuke’s shorter. . . . This is cute.
Heheh, “What am I, your dog?” ^^ This is cute. . . . Aw man, now it’s getting sad. :( . . . Whoa, that was sudden. . . . They say that anxiety never leaves you when you fall in love. . . . I like that separate question: “Would it be Kyuubi who came home?” . . . Hmm, that last sentence, “And they were gone,” sounds ominous. :(
The beginning of this scene doesn’t bode well for me. . . . I love how the revelation came to Sasuke. That was very well-done. . . . Boy, that’s got to be rough. . . . Yeah, he would be a zombie at the academy, wouldn’t he?
Oh good, Naruto came home. . . . Awwww. . . . Hmm, they got a routine: “It’s good to be home.” “Welcome home, love.” Cute. Maybe just a little too cute. But it’s okay. . . . Hee hee, I love Sasuke’s indignation.

Very cute story. Not my favorite, I’m afraid to say, but worth reading, definitely. ^_^
person Ren421
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
person Aura
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I loved it!!! It was sooo sweet:D:D!!!
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haa haa haa! I loved it! That was so cute and funny!


~Sunako Kanzaki~
person Aice
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sasuke is soooo funny.
i've never heard of needing to be grabbed to sleep.
what a weird habit!?
person zeldarules
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute i love it will u please read my story
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this one-shot!!! Haha, this is definetly going on my recommendations list of my story, The Ramen Club! I hope you write more cute stories like this!!! ^^
person Dragon7
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!!!!!!!!! It was so FUCKING FUNNY.............:) :D
person Misa
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whee, so hot, cute and lovely! I liked it!