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for Embracing Dreams

by Arigatomina

person lonelylulaby
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't figure out who those people were until their names were said, so it sorda distracted me. But I still liked the story and can't wait for the next chapter. Also, I liked how Naruto made a Shadow Clone and doesn't understand how it works. And I want to know what happened the last time Iruka caged them and what happened when Kyuubi woke up the first time. So, many mysteries that can't be revealed at once.

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
person Pointlessrant
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Waa I love your story! You've done very well translating the Naruto characters into your story while still keeping their personalities. I especally love Naruto, the way you made his relationship to Kuubi is certainly creative and you can't help but love his personality ^^. Generally I'm a SasuNaru fan rather than a NaruSasu fan but I'll read anything as long as its well written. Uke Naruto tends to have his personality flattened anyways. But no need to rush the smut, their tentative relationship is really cute. I ran across this story this weekend and I couldn't stop reading... though it took a couple sittings, its long enough to be a novel ^^. I hope you plan on continuing it, I'll certainly keep an eye out for it. I can't wait for the truth or dare session, thats bound to be entertaining; and a new mutant being thrown into the mix... I'm going to guess Neji since the person knows Hinata. Though you did mention Gaara coming in at some point... You're a good writer, keep it up!
person Leeana69
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story. I like the mutant powers thing you've added in. ^-^
person Leeana69
schedule November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I adore Kyuubi in this fic, he's so awesome. XD
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is great, I feel reading this here is more like being in a quiet place, w/o a lot of ppl bustling around. HaHa, and no emo-cons to distract my hungry urges.. I really like this update its like you brought us up to speed on where each of the main char, for now, are thinking/feeling. You made Hina very pathetic but great depiction of her Naru character, I like it, I actually felt exhausted with her diminutive demeanor. Sasuke and Naru talking great visual and sneaky funny ending.. BTW Naru left out the worst/best part of teenage truth or dare, kiss so-n-so on the mouth!!! Haha Thanks for the update.. I look forward to more..*off to spam Aarin for the heck of it*
person Dragon7
schedule October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on! Please update, this is a wonderful story and I cant even find it on your website. If you have continued it there could you at least post a link to it? How about this if you agree to continue this story I'll help you spiffy up your web site. I do a lot of work with web designing and applied computer graphics Ive got the experience to help but only if you agree to continue the story K ;) I know I'm rather pathetic try to bribe you like this but seriously I love this story and you are a great writer.
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE, I'm begging you...continue the story. *whimpers* I miss this story so much, the chemistry between the couples is amazing you wright them so brilliantly. This is a very unique (in my opinion) AU twist, I usually don't like AU stories but I love yours. I truly hope that you haven't given up on this.
person Relo
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Idk I think it's sort of fun how your mixing in different anime characters.. I know it probably wasn't your intention but it certainly is interesting
person lonelylulaby
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, when that person drew Kyuubi and the body under his was Naruto I was soo confused. I want to know what happened. Oh well, that can wait. I'll be looking forward to Sasuke and Naruto's heart to heart in the next chapter.

ja ne till next tima