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for Embracing Dreams

by Arigatomina

schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, loved Naruto blushing and trying to help but still finding ways to be mischievous. Kakashi better be careful, Naruto certainly has it out for him. But I guess Sasuke better watch out for when he is better, I can't wait to see Naruto trying to tickle him and the pinning match to get his rights back. I really like the animal persona you give to Naruto in this; the whole pinning match reminds me of that. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I think this is the first of this type of story on here... Rather surprised it hasnt been done before. Love Naruto in this, incredibly strange and undeniably adorable! Cant wait for the next! Ja!
person Dragon7
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!:) When is Iruka coming back? Update soon.
person Anon
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. You get cookies for making your characters IN character, too. Both of 'em are stubborn, but in their own special ways, I'm glad you showed that. ^^ It makes me a happy panda.

Can't wait to see the next chapter. =)
person littleolmee
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just found your fic. I don't usually come over here to the AU's; lack of reading material sent me searching, and I'm so glad I did. It took me two days to get to the current chapter but, this is a wonderful story. Your original characters are interesting and love the mutant addition to the Naruto characters. the interaction between Naruto and Kyuubi is very interesting to read and I can't wait till when Naruto has better use of his powers. It looks like Iruka's house will soon be filled with kids and just who is this character the hospital wants to send? Sasuke and Naruto's interactions are very fun to read plus Kakashi working as an antagonizer is great. Please keep up the good work, I'll be sure to keep my eye out for more from you on this story. Take care.
person cynaga
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more - not too slow for me. Nice and developed. Thanks~!
person Dragon7
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person cynaga
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"There was a nice tang in the air, the sort that bloomed in late spring with hints of the chill to come. The breeze was fickle enough to nip at the knee high grass and bend the blades nearly in half before darting off again like it had never been. The wind and the tang, more than the hint of storm clouds over the mountains in the far distance, promised a storm by evening."

Ah, real writing. A real story. What a delight~! And a fun twist. How cool to see the familiar Naruto characters in the X-Men environment; different but still the same.

Thanks~!
person roro237
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm lol at Kakashi last thought. I like your Kakashi he's a hoot:) I love how the boys like each other it's so sudle and sweet. I was so happy to see you had updated today! It's a nice ending to my Monday work day:) I could tell you have a plot in mine, really I could:)
person Dragon7
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.