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Hi! I've falling in love with your story:) You have a great story line. I hope you'll update soon. I really want to see how the boys become "close" :)

I realized today that this was the fourth time that I've checked to see if this story has been updated since I read it last week. This makes me think I owe you a review, ne? You are fantastic. You are so fantastic, that I have gone and lurked all over your other websites. You write so fantastically that I wish I were more familiar with the other animes you write fanfictions with so that I could read them and appreciate them fully. You tell a story so fantastically that when I had to take a break from reading to go to work, I spent most of the day agonizing over what was going to happen next. I even snuck on a computer during break to read through a chapter, and you can bet that during lunch, reading more was more important at the moment than eating! Everything just flows so wonderfully, I love your characterizations, and the plot is kick ass. I love that Itachi was born a mutant but Sasuke wasn't. I love how Naruto's mutation is both a "talent" and a handicap at the same time. And I can't blame Kakashi for wanting to take over that last chapter (or was it second to last...I can't remember), because his characterization just screams for attention. The way you've structured the story is riveting, artistic, and just plain well-done. I'm impresed so much y this piece of fiction, plus as an added bonus, it's something that I really, really enjoyed reading! I feel like I should be more specific, point to passages that are made of win, but you've rendered me inexplicit and inarticulate. I really love it and I really want to see what happens next. I hope that there are more chapters coming. Keep up the great writing!

I love this! Hope you update again soon.

Ahhh!!! Hey XD, funny meeting you here ;), and with a new chappie no less! *Glomps* THANK YOU!!! I've been having withdrawal symptoms! I'm sorry you had problems getting this one out. It was excellent by the way, perfect mix of funny, scary, cute and sexy, LOL. One of these days I'll figure out how you do it. Your characters still thrill me. The fight was definitely eye opening, and I loved the stipulation of asking, and how he did it... Damn XD. Who knew the kid had it in him?? LOL and I see what you mean by nobody was cooperating. I feel kinda bad that Sasuke's arm got broken! Kakashi's gonna have a conniption, especially since Naruto won't have a visible scratch on him. Did I say how happy I am that you updated? LOL, again THANK YOU!! Please update soon ;), ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥♥ ♥♥

Allys777 from FF.net

Woo Hoo!! I got your first review XD, LOL, that cause everyone else is still trying to catch up ;). I love that you uploaded the whole story all at once, but if you wanted more reviews you should have uploaded a chapter a day til you caught up, of course this way is nicer to the reader ♥

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.