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for Tsunade's Secret Lesson

by yojami

schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sort of feel sorry for Anko.... but I don't because in truth Gai isn't horrible... just a little quirky.

Yay! Tsunade and Kakashi finally got it on!
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rawr! Hey I found you on AFF.net...

*just realized that she reviewed without actually reading the story*

Crap.

Umm... I'm going to read the story now, then leave another review... *shakes head at own stupidity*
person MrsCake
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and funny! The Orochimaru thing was quite a twist. I don't want to be a downer because your plotline is really interesting, but Kakashi's sharingan isn't a bloodline limit. It was transfered from his teammate, Obito. (Many apologies if you already knew.) BUT the Hatake clan does have an interesting ability that only they can activate. I think you can find it on the Wikipedia website or www.leafninja.com under 'Hatake'. I didn't want to pull the rug from under you and leave ya' hanging. I just hope this helps.
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously, this story was so HOT,I had to read it twice. Can't wait for more chappies soon!
person zeroharm
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah for new chap! Goes without saying that the lemon was good. In terms of the plot I am looking forward to how Kakashi's condition is going to affect their relationship. If Orochimaru possesses him... that would be a disturbing read to say the least. On a lighter note you have kept up your streak of giving me funny mental images... the though of the nurses outside the room was priceless :-)
person snowecat
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hope you decide to update soon, I've got this in my alerts on FF. I still think it'd be cool if she got pregnant by Kakashi. Just imagine all the chaos it could cause. Poor Anko, she got laid by Gai. My question is was he any good?
person Nottoca
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just came across this fic and it's wonderful! i can't say i've ever read this pairing but you've written them so well and in character it's totally believable.
and poor anko! that's almost cruel. (sorry, gai creeps me out a bit) i guess you don't try to come between Tsunade-hime and what she wants.
i'll keep checking back for updates (hint hint)
person MrsCake
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! You don't mess with Tsunade! Great chapter!
person sc
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun chapter. I was sure it was Tsunade herself that had impersonated Kakashi, but manipulating Gai into that position was good enough, I suppose. :-)

I've been checking back frequently to see if you've updated this story...I didn't realize you were waiting on reviews.
person vic
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Anko sept with guy! It makes so much sense now. But so gross! Especially because she didn't know!