rate_review Reviews

well truthfully I don't have a clue in who is the dead lover, ...
but I can't wait to know what happens with the two alive ones
WRITE SOON PLEASE

i think you did a wonderful job potraying sasuke's feelings. i can't wait for sasuke to see his "sun". i wonder since this is a three shot if you are going to show how naruto acts in sasuke's world, since right now they are meeting on naruto's territory. or will their relationship be cemented before then and will not factor in. i am also glad to see that you will be updating midnight's moon soon. i can't wait to see the next chapter.

YAY really good!!!! I think you described him perfectly, but I can't wait to have more than just narutos voicein the story!!

Hey Spoon,
I think you did a great job in describing his feelings. I can't wait for the next part of the story. And thanks for your lovely reviews.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. That was great. Hot, sweet and funny, just the way I like it. Can't wait till the next one is up.

i only gonna joke a little cause this chapter was out of season as hell but i really liked it. naruto with ears tail and maid's outfit is so cute (i nearily died from blood loss). and as always cavemen seme sasuke is the shit. i can't wait to see your next chapter because they seem to get better and/or funnier to me as they go along.

Oh I see that you've added this one to the rest of your one shots. I've read it before and loved it. Of course I had to read it again for the smut of course. Nice work.

Wow Naruto is a manipulative little bastard in this oneshot isn't he XD As always I love the new addition. I honestly thought Sasuke would suffer at the hands of a rather large group of indignant women, nice save Sasuke.

~shai~

*Dies of massive nosebleed, then comes back to life to be able to read more great stories* Hot hot hot. I really loved this one too. And H*ll yeah that was hot, kinky, smexy and all other good things. I can't wait for your next story.

this was another great addition to the chapters. are you going to continue this an a epilogue or will it stand alone. i would really like to see what would happen when sasuke and naruto find out about the tape. maybe ino and sakura could put it on a website. and the thing about naruto dening sasuke's use of his hilarious. when you mentioned the light bondage i thoughtthat sasuke would be tieing up naruto, but you switched it and i liked it (i really really liked it).i feel really dumb because out of your three questions i can only answer one as 100 % positive an the rest are only 50/50. au is alternate universe and that is anything that deviates from canon. ja ne is sorta like see ya later (50/50). sorry i am a bad helper. can't wait til the next update.