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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! this was super hot an kinky. mmm.. jummy! I was reading it and thinking please let him fuck him in the changing room. and I got my wish! yay!
and to answer your questions.
AU stands for alternate universe, and ja ne is some sort of goodybye. :)) yuppyupp.. your last question I don`t remember coz my mind is stil bringing up images from your story.. sorry. ;P
and to answer your questions.
AU stands for alternate universe, and ja ne is some sort of goodybye. :)) yuppyupp.. your last question I don`t remember coz my mind is stil bringing up images from your story.. sorry. ;P
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am sorry i was unable to review the first chapter of monster cause i thought it was really good. the epilogue was pretty cool too and the lemon was just right. i hope when it comes to my time to write one that it will be as good (you ain't seen sucky until you read one of mine). i hope you enjoy the holidays and see you when you return. oh wait i don't have a computer so see when i can get back on again.
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That ending was perfect! I can't say more than that. Very beautiful! Thanks for giving us the end to that and hope you have a safe and wonderful vacation!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Spoon Thanx for the update. It was great and that lemom was just sweet. It fit in perfect with the rest of the story. *gives spoon a big hug*
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Thanks for the super fast lightning speed update. I got up this morning and I was like "holly hell O_O that was fast." The epilogue was sweet and so was the lemon, I thought that it fit the rest of the story very well. Hmmm did I mention that the lemon was very good ;-)
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loooved this oneshot....pleae continue it ^_^
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really liked the first story (chapters). The new one (monster) is just as good and I hope you will ad a chapter (or 2 ;)). I really like you're writing style. Keep up the good work.
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh I really like the latest edition. Is there going to be more? @_@ this is me patiently waiting for more ;-)
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading this@!!!!!!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shin-Kiseki Sharingan is so cool can't believe sasuke got it good story plez contniue