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well i hope this is some energy for you because you surely deserve it. this chapter made me smile amd cry at the same time. that should tell you how much of the shit you are. the story about the chick uchiha and mareo (i sorry i only really notice sexy men i'm tacky like that) as the history was really nice. even though i was sad that they never even got to kiss the bittersweet ending of the last entry in the diary was nice. i am sad in a way that this will only be a three shot. i hope you can explore more of the powers of this sharigan in the next chapter since it's the last (double pout attack). maybe sasuke will use it on the stupid villagers who attacked naruto (big ass hint). it would be nice if he could make them experience the pain they have put naruto through his whole life in like a minute after all i believe in slap me and i'll slap you back harder. also like to thank you for telling me about midnight moon i look forward to that update as well.

Great first chapter...always makes
me so happy to see Sasuke come help his blonde.
I noticed you used some of the lyrics from the
song 'Broken' by Seether and Amy Lee..i love that song,
it is one of my favorites and seemed appropriate to use
in your first chapter =) I hope you continue to update,
I would really like to read more.

look at you i officailly am now labeling you a showoff (jealous lazy writer). you just keep churning out interesting little things that make me read instead of write (like i need anymore motivation to be lazy). i am wondering about the villager who stabbed naruto and gave him the poision. is he going to be someone that naruto knows (like kakashi it's a mask thing)possibly even one of the rokie nine or their teachers or will the masked man remain mysteriously unknown. will sasuke be on the hunt for those villagers (since he is the avenger) and he needs to avenge something if he is not leaving the village so that he can train to kill itachi with oochimaru. spending his time avenging naruto which could be funny (depending on how you phrase it). and this story's energy source is a whole basket of delicious powered sugar red bean paste buns (full of sugarey sweet goodness)since we all know you need the energy. hopefully they will energize you enough to update on your other stories as well. thanks and enjoy.

Ok...a little nutty...like me but I like it please update soon! Ja!