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for Tied With a Bow

by hatochan

schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sigh... this is so flippin' hawt. Wonderful writing. The imagery is just... I feel like I can see the yumminess in front of me, I could reach out and touch them, just wish we really could lol
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hatochan.. that was sweet and hot and smexy! Way to go!!
person Just_me
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gawds, first I was suffering from mayor nosebleed (I just loved your slutty Iruka so much), and reading the last part I died of laughter (I could so see Genma do such a thing like paint 'I have crabs' on a chick, while wearing a feral smirk). Your story is just, in one word, HOT! Heck, who wouldn't want a birtday like that... X3

ja ne ^^V