rate_review Reviews

Excellent as always!

What does Tokujou mean?

*Laughing*
Oh, Raidou and Genma... Iruka is sweet and sexy, but Genma wanting to share and Raidou going "No." "but-!" "No." "I-" "No." Awesome. I don't blame him, though! XD Like he said, having to run with a boner is probably The Suck.

Hen, tokujou is short for tokubetsu jounin... special jounin. I'm glad you liked it :) Hey there travellyr :) I can't find an email or anything to reply to you at, but if you send it to me over at Livejournal or somewhere I can reply... Glad you liked it. Genma is just so... so... exasperatingly Genma there, isn't he?? lol

(ch2) poor exasperated Raidou, whatever shall he do with those two-i say join them ;) trying to deny he wants to hear about what happened, i don't believe it for a minute he's just as big a pervert as anyone else he's just really good at pretending and hiding that fact!

heh heh heh, i love when genma teases, well, pretty much anybody. but teasing raido right before a mission, that's pure grade a comedy.

*purrrrrhs* Mmmmn.

This is GOOD, Akegata-san! SEVERAL passages from this made me very very happy in my pants, without doing anything but reading. (Squirming was a natural consequence)

^^ Good at storytelling, good at character-work, good at dialogue, fantastic at porn... HEE. Hatochan is lucky to have you! <3

can't believe i forgot to review this. because, damn damn damn, this was good. i love that iruka meows, it's cute and funny and HOT. i love that genma is so into iruka that he can't even think, has to work at keeping control, and considering his lifestyle, that's saying something. and then iruka completely breaks him down and takes over - awesome! but for all that it's beyond hot and steamy, the best line ever was so sweet:

His next conscious recollection was of a very warm, pliant chuunin seemingly trying to share his skin with him.

please, pretty please, next one - when iruka ties genma up. yeah, i've read it all *grin*, i know what's coming.

i can't even tell you how deliciously hot your Genma was and Iruka, well i just loved him to bits, he seemed so sweet and adorable and at the same time so very sexy! i liked that he really wanted this and there was no way he was going to let Genma get away from him, and all his teasing and dirty talk was just fabulous, poor Genma he really was trying to be good but he just couldn't resist, and who could blame him ;)
i'm so glad hatochan told me about this story it was definitely a fun and smexy read! i hope your going to post more, i would love to see some of your own stories and ideas outside of the TI universe, awesome story i look forward to more of your stuff! ^_^

YAY!!! you did it! wuvely smut for all the world to share ^_^

Excellent, -quality- work... a wonderful gem to accent the TI universe.
In other words, holy HOTTTT! Go 'Ruka!!