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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hurry with the next chapter!!
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Short but sweet, I look forward to the next! Keep it up please!
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August 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
intense emotions are painful
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
to be kissed than stabbed by the same person would suck.
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter, can't wait for the next one
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow.. Sasuke aimed wrong?? poor NAruto~~~ gosh what IS happening to Naruto eh? he is like torn apart from inside out.. more please~~~
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I still have no idea whats happening. The foreplay is killing me! What's going on already??!!!
(I guess I'll have to keep reading, eh?) ;)
(I guess I'll have to keep reading, eh?) ;)
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What's happening?? Theres some kind of crazy shit going on here. Can't wait to find out what happens!
Keep up the good work. ^^
Keep up the good work. ^^
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story so far, though it would be better if you got a beta reader to go over the story to fix and spelling and grammatical errors (I only saw a few.) Even if you don't though I will continue to read as the plot is interesting. Keep up the good work.
FairyNiamh
FairyNiamh
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what's up with naruto? - kyubbi related no doubt - but what about sasu? i thought he was sent by orochimaru to spy? - or did i just read the chapter wrong? why would kohona just let him walkin through the gates like that?
other thatn that my interest is piqued - want to see where this leads in the end.
til the next chapter.
other thatn that my interest is piqued - want to see where this leads in the end.
til the next chapter.