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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
does this mean sasuke and gaara will meat?hope you update soon
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you are proud of this chapter because it is really, really good. I just love your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto. And the fact that you hit on each of their insecurities in such a subtle, meaningful way is beautiful to read.
Awesome, awesome, awesome.
Awesome, awesome, awesome.
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January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
theyve got the serious hots for eachother, wonder when theyll figure that out and stay together.whats orochimaru gonna say about that?hope you update soon
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January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The whole chapter was delightful, but that was some amazing writing at the end describing their feelings and the kiss. Beautiful... just beautiful.
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January 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thats right! Embrace your spirit of youth, Sasuke and Naruto. Sasuke gets a muse, and Naruto an excuse not to agree to become the pervy plaything when Orochimaru moves away. Its win-win!
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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...his eyes looked so dark they almost appeared unnatural. But to Naruto it was the sexiest thing about the older man, they were dangerous but Naruto felt himself being drawn closer and closer the more time he spent with him however he couldn't stop no matter how much he tried."
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I want you to know that I went back and re-read the whole story because I remembered how much I loved it while reading your update. Spectacular. I love Sasuke letting Naruto sleep in the bed. So adorable.
And there's so much sweet fluffy goodness that I can't help but think you might be setting us up for a big ol' kick in the nose when things get complicated... as if they aren't now.
I am looking forward to the next chapter with the wide eyed anticipation of a five year old at Christmas.
Awesome, awesome, awesome. I want you to know that I went back and re-read the whole story because I remembered how much I loved it while reading your update. Spectacular. I love Sasuke letting Naruto sleep in the bed. So adorable.
And there's so much sweet fluffy goodness that I can't help but think you might be setting us up for a big ol' kick in the nose when things get complicated... as if they aren't now.
I am looking forward to the next chapter with the wide eyed anticipation of a five year old at Christmas.
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooOOOOoooo mac book! I want so bad. Those suckers are expensive though, so as sleek and sexy as they are, you could probably afford to buy 2 top of the line decked out PCs for the same money. I have both a mac and a pc so I know how you feel about the macs. ^^ (My pc is currently down too. Although I won't bog down my mac with downloading anime, so I really need to fix the damn thing. Bleh!)
Keep up the great work and I look forward to your new chapters when they do eventually get posted. ^^
Keep up the great work and I look forward to your new chapters when they do eventually get posted. ^^
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That sucks that windows has decided to crack out on you. I really like this fic and I can't wait for the update :-)
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yep PC's suck. I read a shirt once that said 'My computer has a virus it's called Windows'. LOL Anyway MacBooks are awesome. I had to get one for the college program I'm in, but they're sooooo expensive! It cost more than my car! =O
Well I really like your story and I hope your computer issues are fixed.
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Well I really like your story and I hope your computer issues are fixed.
=)
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job, even if it was short, it was still good. Can't wait for the next one.