rate_review Reviews

Thanks for the new chapter and the lemon!!!! :) It was great!!

Thank you for the new chapter and it was good! :)

What will happen next? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

a little shorter than i'd have liked it but by no means sucky. I hope to see an update soon.

ohmygosh! I'm just reading this story for the first time and I'm absolutely loving it. (Keep in mind that anything with an Orochimaru pairing would normally make me gag at the thought.. I mean ewwww, however in this story its great!) I loved how you developed the characters and the set-up between Naruto and Sasuke.

But damn it.. evil cliffhanger!!! Who could the voice belong to?? In such a swanky hotel.. my guess is maybe Neji?

Keep up the good work!

No Naruto! Scary snake men... BAD! Hot, moody authors... HOTTTT... I mean GOOD. Do I need to draw a picture?? (raises eyebrow) Awesome update. Can't wait for the next.

dID HE HEAR HIM OR SOMETHING?

by the way i am having problems with my computer and will not be updating til oct. 11 when my computer is fixed. i really like this chapter but who can't love a chapter with ochimaru doing basically a proposal to naruto. you are a bombin genius i never would have expected ochimaru to have it in him 9leaving the wife and the kid). is the person he choose as his first vessel going to be his son. will he confront naruto about breaking up his happy home. i can't wait to see. will you be hooking up menma with anyone known or will his pairing be a total surprise because i think him and pein would be nice as well. sorry for the short note but i have limited computer time so i glad that yu are enjoying hong kong and i can't wait to see your next update.

Awww Shit, who dies?

Well I saw that coming! I hope he makes the right choice and Stay With Saus. Great story line by the way. I am enjoying this story.