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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, Naruto! Say no! Sasuke is so much, well, let's face it, FREAKY. I can't wait to see how Naruto handles it. And to get a little Sasuke/Naruto time in. Excellent story.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IF HE EVER SAID YES TO OROCHIMARUS QUESTION ID BE SICK,DUNNO WHY BUT HE ALWAYS SEEMED SLIMY AND OILY TO ME.ALL GOOD ANIMALS HAVE SOMETHING UGLY I SUPPOSE.WHATS GAARAS REACTION GANNA BE WHEN HE FINDS OUT ABOUT SASUKE?AND SASUKES REACTION WHEN HE FINDS OUT ABOUT OROCHIMARU?CANT WHAT TO FIND OUT HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!
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September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... so good. I love your portrayal of Sasuke and Naruto. Naruto is adorable. Sasuke has the perfect balance of moodiness/sexiness/and dare I say "cuteness". I'm excited to see where you take them. And Neji and Gaara should be fun too. Can't wait to see where that goes as well. Until then...
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
as always another great chapter plus i have to give extra bonus points (for the naruto giving sasuke a blow job). but it does bring up some questions. is this going to be a little like say pretty woman with julia roberts and richard gear. is sasuke going to end up turning into a sexy possessive bastard. because if he does then will naruto have to choose between the life he has now with the easy lay joy (if you know what i mean) or sasuke. what about ochimaru we haven't seen him since the first chapter will he be making another appearence soon. is sasuke going to put neiji out there with gaara the same way that neiji did him with naruto. are you going to have naruto have a bad experience with one of his customers. if so will he tell sasuke and what will he do about it. basically i want to know if there will be a part for the avenger sasuke in this story. sorry about my update by the way i lost the page and had to redo it (you know i was upset and lost motivation) but it will be up by late friday night. thanks for the nice time and can't wait for the next update.
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WOULD BE HIS FIRST THOUGHT AFTER THAT, ONE TRACK MIND...NICE,HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very hot chapter. Can't wait for the next.
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! Please add another chapter soon!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You got me now. Can't wait for more~!
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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a hot chapter! Please continue!!