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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sexy, and unexpected! I wish everytime i had a headache i could wake up like that! Nice job.
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i am so sorry i have not had the time to review your stories lately. i humbly bow with my head to the floor and beg forgiveness. i like to really take my time when reading your stories so that i can always leave a review. i have started a story up finally and have been bouncing back between writing that (which is really hard) and my law classes. i am so glad that you are enjoying hong kong. i would love to be an exchange student but my major is not flexible enough for me to take off ( so live it up for those of us who can't). i really liked the last two chapters by the way (you go girl with neiji having a thing for gaara). so did gaara and neiji meet through gaara's job or outside of it. if neiji and gaara was together then how come naruto never meet neiji. is it because they are supposed to have meet before gaara knew naruto. does gaara not even mention neiji for naruto not to know his name. i am still hoping that sasuke and ochimaru fight over naruto (i don't know why and if you asked me i would say the same thing except i think it's sexy). that's all for me for now but i am not promoting or anything but i would really like to know what you think of my story so please check it out and let me know if you think it's a dud or not. thanks and can't wait to see you next update. by the way i found some of those marshmellow chicks covered with pink sugar sprinkes just for you.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, its a start. Please continue!!
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! So THAT'S Neji's relationship with Sasuke huh...interesting. I wonder what Neji thought of Naruto. Cant wait for the next update.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least they didnt make any mistakes they would regret glad we got to see neji in that way/light and ive never actually heard of anyone using menma so i was kinda slow remembering who he was,the guy with the fluet thing like link right?hope you can update soon
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
glad to know you arrived safely and are happily settling in. i can't wait to see the epilogue. i know it's bad but i'm hooked on this story now so i can't wait til the next update.
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August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is Kajii Motojirô books the Scrolls of Darkness a real book?i wanna read it.
glad you updated
glad you updated
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!
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August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First time i'm reading this story and i like it alot! I'm certainly curious about what'll happen next. Stop being such a bastard Sasuke. Update soon!
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August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should get a new beta, one with grammar and punctuation skills. It's hard to take a story seriously when punctuation is missing, capitalizations are skipped, and sentences don't make sense. This could be a good story if it weren't so difficult to read.