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schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you must have been reading my mind. i am not going to lie and say that i was going to sk oochimaru, sasuke, and naruto's ages. let me find out that bombin sasuke x naruto fica sre written my psychics (or aliens your choice). have you decided if the owners of the host club are going to be sleezy slimy guys (i know it's kakashi and iruka but come on their pimps) or nice guys with hearts of gold who are looking out for unemployale men (by pimping them out). i am still up in the air as to whether you will have itachi be really dead or fake dead 9i know you can't say but putting a couple of hints in would be nice). when naruto is at the host club is he exclusively oochimaru's when he is there only or is naruto allowed to have other customers when oochimaru is not present. i think shikamaru would make a good customer. he seems to me to be the type that would go to a host club because he would find it to troublesome to date but would still like some company (naruto). if naruto is on his way to work perhaps you could show a day there and possibly sasuke showing up there unexpectedly and upsetting the applecart so to speak. i think i will wait for another chapte or two to come out before i bombard you. i kinda wanna know who the playes in the game are before i run off at the mouth. thanks for the great chapter and can't wait for the next one.
person hisoka
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...he can cook,but he still eats ramen.sasuke is ungratefull but thats just the way he is cant show his apreciation.this story is likes, so update when possible
person gaara89
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's always a pleasure to read your stories even if you KILL me with your cliff hangers oh you angsty tease you lol! I can't wait to see the next chapters in both your stories
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cool story. Poor sasuke has a cold. I bet Naruto could make him feel better * wink wink* Well can't wait for next chapter.
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schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought this was a great chapter to give nruto and sasuke breathing room (or more like naruto since he was the only one up). a sort of pause break to digest their two meetings and why he is helping out a stranger and even though sasuke was only up for a little while his thinking about letting a stranger into his home. i like big brother gaara. is he like how kit in pretty woman was to julia roberts (showing her the ropes (on how to be a hooker). i could totally see gaara having her attitude if you know what i mean (especially with how naruto felt he would get a lecture if he told gaara where he was at). no questions for now just anxiously awaiting the next chapter with sweet surprises instore for hard working authors.