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by ringpop

person mrzuchiha
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!
i loved this chapter so much!!
yes you should continue it =]
it freaking rocks!!
schedule January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
erm not sure i'm too feeling where this chapter is going :S But i LOVED the first 3 chapters so i definitely say continue it!
person despairs
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:( @ end of last chapter. Me wanna go cry now.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Geez.

Ino and Sakura are bitches here.
person I.Drowned.My.Goldfish
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE A HORRIBLE, HORRIBLE PERSON! Sasu/Saku should be shot, trampled, drowned, burned and thrown of a building!
Poor Sasuke! Goo Naruto! Save him from horrible straight sex!

But uhh.. if they do have sex, pleaaaaaaase don´t make Sakura pregnant >.<
person Word_Slave
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you picked this up again, but I have to admit, I'm a bit concerned about Sasuke. At this point I wouldn't blame him if he just packed up and left. God, Naruto is such an idiot! How is he going to protect Sasuke now?
Slave
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! OH NOOOSS!!!! Poor Sasuke, I hope Naruto can make it in time to do Something about that Whore Sakura!! GO NARUTO!!!You can do It!! DATTEBAYO!! XD
person despairs
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read chapter 5 again...NOOOO! Just knowing Sakura and Ino has their hands, mouths, ANYTHING on Sasuke's body makes me want to throw up seriously. *CRIES* i'll just be in the corner trying to recover from that. *mumbles something about Naruto being a fuckin moron and Sasuke is too for taking a pill from those 2 slutbags* NOOOOOO!
person Halskr
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks for sharing this.
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That's evil what Sakura and Ino did to Sasuke! Taking advantage of him like that. Though I wouldn't put it past them. Poor Naruto. Love the story! Update soon!