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by ringpop

person Vivi & Venny
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Venny: Oh yea, baby! I KNOW you missed us~!

Vivi: Lmao. Shush, you silly monkey!

Venny: Confess our undying love? ....Alright! *gets down on one knee*

Vivi:.....Stop....Just stop.

Venny: *sticks out tongue* Jealousy is an ugly thing Vivi!

Vivi: Shut up. Now! I liked that one~! All hott 'n steamy~! My idea of the PERFECT rim job wasn't in there; but sexy all the same!

Venny:......Sai is a sexy beast.

Vivi: O.O Tha hell, man? She didn't even mention him in this chap, I dun think.

Venny: Well, he is!

Vivi:......

Venny: I liked the teasing bit, beautiful, love.

Vivi:......Can we have more SasuNaru action, with the drama? Like......How there JUST about to do it; but they can't find any lube, and they don't wanna do it raw....yet? XDDD Okay, Okay. Sorry; nvm!

Venny:....Gawd, your worse than I am.

Vivi: Hey! That-....Oh who am I kiddin'? Just say the endin', fluffy.

Venny: Worth the wait, love. Even if it was shorten than the rest. Loved it.

Vivi: Ja~

~Vivi & Venny
person animelover
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious, Hilarious,Hilarious!!! You have the gift of gab, hon. I'm mean the dialogue is as if you're standing right there and it's someone you've know 4-ever. Awesome, and I can't wait to find out Sasuke's secret.

Keep up the good work!
person TFizzle
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a 'Hella' story and I am down for whichever way you
take it....Don't let any 'wanna-bees' deter you from doing
what's right, and by that I mean finishing this fic........
Your story is a fresh new look at *Life with the characters
of Naruto*::baby mama drama::(smiles)I love it!!!!Keep on
keepin' on and I will keep on readin'.....UPDATE SOON!!!!
Oh yeah, Holla if you hear me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person BlackDiamond
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU! =D you wrote a new story and it is amazing! just like Mr. Right =) update when you can wifey XD
person blueh
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! I was laughing my head off when I read the response to that... anonymous person. Weirdo. Anyway... I can't wait for Naruto to play the jealousy game. Hehehe...
person kai
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I WONDER HOW HES GONNA GET HIM BACK WITH THE JELOUSY GAME,CANT WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER AND FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS AND WHOS INVITED TO THE PARTY
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Daaaaammmmmnn! haha you best be updatin soon. I thought I was your beta *pouts*. If you help me with Leather and Silk I'll help you with Stay. Deal? Ja!
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait to see who naruto flirts with to get back at sasuke. i hope him and kiba do something in the freezer isle...why the freezer isle?

CUSE ITS SMEXY >_
person ll
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
greatness!! This is getting better and better, but i would like to see somemore of Naruto's past come to life, such as the fact what he was probably rapped more then once as a child. It should show, but since this is just starting out i can wait longer. This is really a great start to a good fanfic. Can't wait to read more.
person LadyWolf
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Me likey, me likey!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would looovvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeee to read more!!!!!!