rate_review Reviews

i like this story. especially that cute chubby chibi-sasuke. i like the history that naruto and sasuke seem to have together. please tell me if this is a sasukexnaruto story. please update soon.

What is this? You've made Naruto and Sasuke into Stues. Oh, so Sasuke was fat when he was a kid? Trying to pull the ugly duckling card? Poor Sasuke only has Naruto as his one -true- friend, and as a result falls deeply and madly in love with the blonde... And look what you did to Naruto! What, it's not bad enough that he's an orphan living in foster care, no he also has to be raped!? Please. In your later chapters, you don't even show that it has had any effect on Naruto at all. It's a fucking traumatic experience being raped! At this point in the story, the whole thing is absolutely pointless! And what was the point behind Itachi not telling anyone that they were moving away/back? Oh, that's right, there wasn't one. The pairing is so horribly overused and cliche that I want to gouge my eyes out with sporks whenever I see the words SasuNaru. You may like the pairing, yes, but I would think that there are enough overly redundant SasuNaru fics out there that you shouldn't feel the need to pollute the fandom with more!

One of the only good things I found about this was that your writing was actually mostly competent, though you shouldn't use fucking actions as replacement for dialogue.

Get an imagination!

~ANM

I like it alot. the smut scene was HOT and i love Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. PLZ CONTINUE!

I really love this story (fangirl squeal >_<) sasuke is so cute and he really does fit as a bottom i mean you cant spell "sasuke" without "uke" or "ass" lol. i cant wait for the next chapter and your last chapter did not suck it was very nice and sentamental. i was trying to decide between having a bloody nose from the smexyness or crying beacuse it was so sweet. i went for the bloody nose ^_^. please update soon so that i may bask in my own perverted bloodynoseness.(that word is trademarked by me so no using..unless you update ^_^)

zell-chan

Yay! Another great chapter! I love it when Sasuke cum kisses Naruto... so yummy!
I wonder who was at the door o.0 ???? I don't know why in the hell I'm thinking that it's Sakura lol!
Oh, I'm sorry to hear that you have writer's block, that really sucks. Hopefully it won't last long! ^^
Keep up the good work and update when you can! XD

wow, your good at describing things,so who was knocking?
hope you updats just as fast if not sooner is better, dont forget up we can make your life hell and make you misrable(doughtable)
amusion....amusement would work fine but makeing up words is even better, such a fantastical imagination

Oh man...what a cliffhanger. Now i'm wondering who is outside the door yelling at Naruto.
And whoa whoa whoaaaaa! Super nice lemon my friend, i like how you make Naruto hung in your stories wo0t lol.
I'm jealous of Kiba..i'd love a front row seat watching my favorite couple kiss.
Eh...i'm worried about the thing with Sakura tho...i hope she wont make trouble =(
And i hope Itachi wont make them separate anymore..GAH! So much stress and its only been 3 chapters /:

I about screamed when I seen that you update!!! XD It’s probably a good thing that I didn’t though…or my neighbor’s would probably kill me.
So anyway… –Glomps– I loved this chapter! And yeah for more head bands… you can never go wrong there! Also I like how you depicted Naruto. He still has a lot of flavor, but it’s different from Mr. Right… very nice! ^^
Hehe, so Sasuke got skinny and Naruto got rich, I like that. And all those flashback are so cute. I absolutely adored the one with the Popsicle!!! Your characters have such personality to them, and that really adds to the story.
Grrrr… but I wanted to slap Naruto at the end of this chapter. Sleep or making out with Sasuke…come on now, what the hell was he thinking. Ah, but I do LOVE how you always have them hindered in some sense… it makes the anticipation much more palpable. ACK!!!!! I wand more, more, more…

Keep up those awesome writing skills of yours!!!!! Update soon! ^^

Ah, and to answer your question: no, I’ve never seen that show before. I don’t watch a lot of TV though. O.0 Yeah, I’m weird…

Whats happening! ^^

Awesome!! <333 it! Hot!! ^.^ Hope to read more, and if you have an updating list, mind adding me? Please and thanks!