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LOL, I love ya!
And this was really good; I liked everything about it. Sadly though, I have little to offer you it regards to a plot. I tend to write angst, and hell, I could probably overkill this kind of story with it --and that would just disgrace the beautiful thing that you’ve got going here. So yeah, no plot advice from me, but I will cheer from the side-lines and review! ^^
Sooooooo…I like how you made Sasuke fat. Somehow, I can picture him like that. 1 million points for being adverse. I wonder though, is Sasuke still going to be fat now that he’s older? And what about Naruto?

Ack, this story is awesome so far and I want to read more!!!

UPDATE SOON! I COMMAND IT!!!! And so does my CAPS Lock button…apparently o.0!

even if your not satisfied i like it,i suck with plots so im no help 2 u sorry
hope you find a plot soon so you can update its cute

I'm lovin it so far!! A fat Sasuke?! That's hard to imagine! I bet he was still adorable^_^

love it!!! it seems that this might be a really great story ^_^ update soon.

What a great fic. I loved it. :)

You need a plot? Ask and you shall recieve. Just IM me. You got my IM Address girl. As for a plot I can see a whole lot of ways this can go. just IM me, I won't bite ya I promise. Ja!

I really like this one.I hope you write more soon.