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Chapter 4's 'cockfight' was the juvenile kind of stupid-funny that I get a big laugh out of. First the incredulous misinterpretation of the subject and then the physical comedy in the acting out of the 'cockfight'_so simple and yet so funny. The previous 3 chapters were all amusing in their own original ways. You do a great job with the humor. I didn't quite understand the need for the last sentence in chapter 4-it left me with the impression that Sasuke left Naruto angry, instead of laughing at the absurdity of the situation. I've read so many of your stories over the last couple of days. Very original and unique ideas/thoughts/plots/concepts. Covering a wide range of states of mind and emotions and situations. I am glad to have the opportunity to read and enjoy the stories you share with us_Thank you!

OMG this was great. "sasuke's dead"lol. is naruto really that much of an idiot that he dosent kn what a cockfight is? u really had someone yell "KILL PPL?" thats great. I love ur fics.

And Sasuke did, in fact, welcome him, with open arms and open legs. Really open legs. Extremely open legs, with a hand wrapped around a straining erection, moving fluidly over the well-lubed length, eyes closed, toes curled, teeth biting erotically into a full, bottom lip, a purr rumbling deep within a pale neck begging to be mauled.


Dear God~ that paragraph was so good! Very very good. Orgasmically good.

Sasuke's dead!
OH MY GAWD
I luve your stuff
I really do
never stop writting
...
please

second giggle:

I so wasn't expecting that! I LOVED all Naruto's declartions, so damn cute

<3

These are highly amusing. I love the corny punchlines!

Are you EVER going to finish or even STATE the discontinue of 'Memories of the Future??'

If you quit, state it, so, readers would know..Jeez!!!

To be honest I thought chapter 3 with the line 'sasuke's dead' had me in a fit, i laughed for about 5 mins straight and then the odd random chuckle, i also enjoyed reading the other chapters as well and cant wait to see what else will be written.

LMFAO SOL was great! I loved it. Gotta go read the other ones now.

Another awesome chapter, I love how Sasuke got so caught up in describing to Naruto that he forgot about the game. Once again you've brightened my day :)