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by BishounenKrazed

person Adi
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god *dies* I've just read the first one, and now have to rush away, but I wanted to let you know that "We're out of ramen" killed me dead. My death in on your conscience!!!!!! WILL COME BACK FOR MORE!
person Taylor
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was great.
It's hilarious that masturbater sounds like mass debater.
XD

twistedneko@yahoo.com
person Taylor
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WTF!?
THAT WAS AS FUNNY AS THE REST OF 'EM!
Cockfights...that's was great. XD
Keep up the good work!
twistedneko@yahoo.com
person Taylor
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just great.
AMAZING job. I'm so glad to have found this. It was hilarious. KEep up the good work.

twistedneko@yahoo.com
person Shia
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaa... xDDD That made me laugh!! And the smut was very, very good... >_>
person qwerty
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"poor people live here" "3rd world countries" ouch, that's a slap in the face.
very funny!
update!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like these stories of yours. looks like sasuke needs to stay focused. i can't wait to see the next one. by the way how many will there be. thanks
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one (#6) Brought a smile to my face. *giggles* I look forward to your next giggle. Ja Ne.
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
shooot! i'd been hella pissed at neji, too!! free show, damnit! free show! lol. looking foward to the next!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears from her eyes* seriously you manage to make me laugh constantly. I love these little vignettes, and Naruto's little lie was fantastic. You should take many more classes that allow you to write stuff like this :)