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for Make 'em Laugh

by BishounenKrazed

schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was really surprised when the queen of angst put out something funny so i am not going to lie i was skeptical. but those five chapters was hilarious. you definitely made me laugh and since i needed thanks. i can't wait to see the next one.
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha that was funny. You don't need to lie just reword things.
=)
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh heavens above! I'm going to die from laughter! If anyone asked which of these giggles was the best I couldn't answer... I would just say all of them. Thank you for yet another giggle. And as always I look forward to your next giggle. Ja Ne
person qwerty
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love these!!!
Do more!!!
person Sancta
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LoL. I love this fanfic. Especially the last two chapters, I love the little twist you left in the end. Can't wait for the next chapter
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!!

That was cute!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol! rear end collison!
person hisoka
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WELL... THOSE WERE EMBARASSING IF YOU WERE ACTUALLY IN THOSE SITUATIONS, LIKE THE SPINE ONE DOES THAT REALLY HAPPEN IF A GUY BREAKS HIS SPINE OR WAS IT JUST BULL?SASUKE GETS SCREWED ALOT IN THE PHYSICAL WAY AND IN THE SENSE THAT HIS LIFE SCREWS HIM OVER. MUCH LIKED!
person Xenobia
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! Cockfights!!! Too frickin' HILARIOUS...I love it!

Fabulous job...please keep it up!

Xenobia
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, I'm dying here! (Almost literally since I decided to eat while reading 'Health Class') Those were Cracktastic! I look forward to another giggle. Domo and Ja Ne!