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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Your writing is a joy to read, it flows so easily. Your portrayal of the characters is brilliant. I can't wait to hear more about Sasuke and Naruto's past and to see their present play out as well. Until then...
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter. about the pace i don't think anything is wrong with it in fact it seems to be flowing along. i guess sasuke never told nauto that he was a vampire before and something happened to naruto because of it. i can't wait to see if that's it or not .
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope those can make up and apologize. Please continue!!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this....please post more!
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you're keeping them in character cause in my opinion sasuke doesn't know when to stop talking when it comes to naruto. i really like this story so far keep it up. ja ne.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
\(ºvº)/ yay!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
by the way this chapter is a little angsty but i like it. things that go easy ain't no fun. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome!!!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three answered alot of questions, and Sasuke being the son of the first vampire? Great twist. Can't wait for another update.
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the plot so far. can't wait for the next chapter.