rate_review Reviews

i really enjoyed that story...you did an excellent job on it....loved your A/N about it being shinobis gone wild...lol...

I'm really really impressed! You made it hot, you made me care about them, and you made sure we knew who was doing what to whom, even though we were dealing with four people with the same pronoun ;). I don't think I've ever read such a good angst/porn mix.

Love,
Lem Lem

I'm not sure why you hate this piece, I think it is exceptionally well written, full of many layers of emotions and a important key part of the series of stories, I really do love this one... the sex is better in some of the others but this one has the depth of emotion that draws you into the story. Yes, it's sad about Sasuke's feelings but it's a key part of what makes this a very good story and expands upon the relationship between him and Kakashi in a way that brings the whole storyline together! I have read this story, and the rest of the storyline, many times and love it. You should be proud of this story and the great writing skill you have.

Yes it ends sad for Sasuke... but I think this story is perfect that way, it fits into the drama and complexities that Kakashi is a key player (or cause) of. Perfect, you say they don't have a plot... but they do. Thank you for another fantastic story.

Oh, god, I'm so happy for Sai and Yamato, but so sad for Sasuke, Iruka, and Kakashi. Good lord, what's next??? I must go read more and find out!!

The glove fetish thing is fascinating!
This whole thing was really incredible.

"and who the FUCK put so many rocks in this fucking field? Nothing made Yamato angrier than stumbling over rocks"
ROFLMBFAO...poor Yamato...I sooo think you hit a characters quirks right on the head

*GUH* Yours is porn with a plot...the long history behind these people give depth to your stories like no other

CORUPT Kakashi!!!...poor Tenzou, just cannot compete with that onslaught...little Sai is HOT...Shikyaku is HOT...I just don't know how you could think this was unworthy! I know...not enough of our cute selves in it to keep your interest

Pooor Sasuke...*sob* I swore that I started to read this story before...maybe my ADD kicked in and I got distracted from the last chapter? Because *hides face from Shikyaku in shame* I sooo have not read this before. I so now get what happened in "Best Laid Plans" now...

Oh, yes. This is good on so many levels. Of course smexy as hell. But I enjoyed the whole underlying "argument" for monogamy so much also. The personalities were well defined and fascinating too.

I can't believe you kept apologizing for adding chapters - the length is just right!