rate_review Reviews

Shikyaku I am absolutely loving your stories! You are writing superbly and I cannot wait to read what is going to happen next, especially to poor Sasuke. I really like the bond he had with Sai and that they were able to share something special together. The end of Yaoi_is_my_antidrug's story was just so sweet and touching and I felt happy for Sasuke! It was so emotional when he had to let Sai go and was then left alone in his grief. Deep down I am hoping Sai weakens and breaks this sudden promise of exclusivity because Sasuke+Sai was really hot and kinky..I love how they look alike haha, and also I think that he really considers Sasuke to be one of his special people on more than just a friendly level.

Anyways, Sasuke deserves some happiness and I am hoping it comes along in the form of a certain sexy, sun kissed, blue eyed, ramen loving, noticeably absent blond but I can't help it, he's my absolute favorite! Keep up the good work and thanks for the awesome stories, you rock! <3

Yeah, reading the stories in order definitely makes sense now. So, I love the whole education of Sai deal, that scene in the woods is so hot! But I must say, in this chapter, Kakashi is my hero:

"What do you want from me, Sasuke? What do you want, that I am actually capable of giving?"

..."That's the problem for both Iruka and myself, isn't it. How very little you're capable of giving."

"I've been more than patient with your demanding bitch mouth this evening. Here's what I'm capable of giving... And I know for a fact it's exactly what you want to take."

and

"No. Sasuke will do it. Sasuke who wants to be in control of all of us one minute, then have us believe he's a powerless victim the next."

Those lines just seem to hit Sasuke and his relationship right on the head; I really like KakaSasu and also KakaIru, and it's heart-clenching to see them pitted against each other, with Sasuke wanting Kakashi, knowing Kakashi doesn't want him the same way, but being unable to stop wanting him all the same.

Uh-oh! No more play-time with Sai for Kotetsu and Izumo or Genma or Raidou! That was a hot piece of fanfic, if I do say so myself- I love the glove kink!

And this:
Sasu: "Let me go"
K: "I can't"
S: "Then let him go"
K:"I can't. I won't"
S: "Figure something out."

OMG! So sad TT_TT I can't tell you how much I'm loving this. What will happen to poor Sasuke? And will Kakashi learn that you can't have your cake and eat it too? (If you haven't read the story 'Hating You' you should, it's got an awesome tea and cake metaphor in it!)

Oh, wow. How sad. Sasuke is my baby. I hate to see him sad, but that's life when you're involved with someone like Kakashi, right? My daughter absolutely abhors Sasuke and I can't understand it. She thinks he's such a bastard, and I'm like 'yeah' but look what he's been through. Poor baby. Very well written and I can't wait to see what happens with Sasuke. (I hope he gets some much deserved love at some point--I mean I like Kakaruka and all, but Kakashi just 'belongs' with Sasuke) that's just my silly opinion. You are a master of the written word and I am looking forward to all your future works!

I love all of your stories! Can't wait for the next one!

I just read yaoi-is-my-antidrug's story, and then I came over here to read yours. Wow - this is so hot and things make a little more sense now. I'm going to have to start at the beginning, though. I was wishing there was more Kakashi in A New Feeling, and now I read this one, and there's a lot of Kakashi! Wow, this is one of the hottest things I've ever read. I liked all the different relatonships, and how complicated it was. I liked how Sasuke told Sai it was okay at the end, even though it was a little sad. This was a great story and I bookmarked your page so I could read the reast later!

Heh.. haven't reviewd your latest chapters.. why's that? I don't know.
I thought alot about it, but didn't actually act upon it.
This could really be described as "shikyakus fuckverse" XD You've got your very own unique writing style.
I really love those moments, when our rutting shinobis reach their orgasmic peak.. and the way you describe those primal needs and movements and pushing.. and pulsing, fucking, sw... eh, i'm drifting off. ^^´

You know we love your stories. : )

And:

mia, or gia or whatever it was: "fuck off."

Beyond lovely smut, your take on the Naruto-verse over several parts and its relationships/interactions is interestingly multi-dimensional. As seen with Sasuke and the Yamato-Sai pair, while relationships may not necessarily have to follow standard formulas and boundaries, making any type work can be more complex. At least that's how I see what you've done, whether purposeful or not. Of course, I may be thinking to hard...

Well, I do like that there are different takes and pov. You juggle them nicely, and I enjoy that everything doesn't end satisfactorily for everyone [though that might be sadistically wrong..hmm].

Again, looking forward to the next part. Hoping it might answer some more of my questions, like what happens next for Sasuke and Kakashi? What about Sai? What have Iruka [really am just darn curious with this one and anticipating his story] and the others been up to? and so forth. 'Til then...

*MAJOR NOSEBLEED* Man, do all your stories have to do this to me?? *Falls over dead from Bloodloss* X.X

While I liked the story a lot because the smut was incredibly well-written, I couldn't help but feel cold and disappointed because you left Sasuke out in the cold. So instead of feeling satisfied of reading a nice pwp, right now I am mostly pissed off by the way you treated my favourite character, i.e. treated him like a rag. That and your supposed dirty talk is far too clinical to actually be taken as dirty talk.

It's your story, you decide what to do, but I doubt I'd come back and read other fiction written by you, not when you made me feel cheated that I spent almost an hour reading a fic that ultimately left me disappointed.