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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaargh fuck write more soon pleasepleaseplease.
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're killing me... you're freaking killing me. I can barely type...
Ho, Lee shit. Did I tell you I really like the way you write Sai? Orally fixated, penis-obsessed, strangely aloof, and sexy-as-hell. Guh. And Tenzou too, though I'm not all that familiar with his character. Love how he was still so respectful of Kakashi's privacy by not looking at his face, and the way he approved of Sasuke finally accepting his submissive role struck me as prim and old-fashioned in the midst of all of those goings-on, and it was perfect. ^_^
I almost died when Kakashi pushed Sasuke up against the wall. Died. I had to read that part like five times in a row. Grr. The way they interact is almost uncomfortable to read, but not in a bad way - there's tension there that sexual release won't touch, and it's freaking hot. I don't know what you're talking about when you say PWP, buddy. And... Sai - licking Sasuke's cock - when Sasuke was riding Kakashi - sakjljfslka I shorted out.
Great great great great! I'm sure I'll be reading this again, later. ^_____^
Ho, Lee shit. Did I tell you I really like the way you write Sai? Orally fixated, penis-obsessed, strangely aloof, and sexy-as-hell. Guh. And Tenzou too, though I'm not all that familiar with his character. Love how he was still so respectful of Kakashi's privacy by not looking at his face, and the way he approved of Sasuke finally accepting his submissive role struck me as prim and old-fashioned in the midst of all of those goings-on, and it was perfect. ^_^
I almost died when Kakashi pushed Sasuke up against the wall. Died. I had to read that part like five times in a row. Grr. The way they interact is almost uncomfortable to read, but not in a bad way - there's tension there that sexual release won't touch, and it's freaking hot. I don't know what you're talking about when you say PWP, buddy. And... Sai - licking Sasuke's cock - when Sasuke was riding Kakashi - sakjljfslka I shorted out.
Great great great great! I'm sure I'll be reading this again, later. ^_____^
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August 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ne! Gah! So so hot!
>.> I'm so speechless, I've resorted to one-lining. Damn me.
>.> I'm so speechless, I've resorted to one-lining. Damn me.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh... poor yamato. So you started to get a liking in torturing him. lol
I really like how your stories are all connected somehow. : ) Describing this scene from the view point of someone who isn't (yet ?) involved is refreshing. : )
I think wanking kakashi might be one of my mainly kinks. XD
I wonder how this will continue. ^^
And now.. i have to get up to work. *bla*
I really like how your stories are all connected somehow. : ) Describing this scene from the view point of someone who isn't (yet ?) involved is refreshing. : )
I think wanking kakashi might be one of my mainly kinks. XD
I wonder how this will continue. ^^
And now.. i have to get up to work. *bla*
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor Yamato. How long will he be able to hold up this weak denile? When is he just going to give in and get off? Or do you intend to have him like this through all four chapters? I'm just dying to find out.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and you were saying all those mean things about this wonderful, hot piece of literature, Shikyaku?...you didn't really mean it, did you...naahh, of course, you didn't...cause if the very beginning is hot like that,what's the rest going to be like?? *drools to death*...
i feel so sorry and yet so envious about poor yamato...i'd die to overhear a conversation like that and witness the scene that followed...but yamato doesn't seem to be all that comfortable about it (even though it was HIS idea to take sai and naruto to the hotsprings back then...and don't tell me noone thought about the perverted double-meaning of that action XD)))
i loved that discovery you made about ninja's being attracted to the one's that feel a certain deal of annoyance or repulsion towards them...that is so true)))
i love the docile sai, the teasing sasuke bossing kakashi around and the said perverted copy-nin...can't wait to read how that bunch of konoha's horny shinobis would be corrupting the pure delicate yamato!!! XD)))
i feel so sorry and yet so envious about poor yamato...i'd die to overhear a conversation like that and witness the scene that followed...but yamato doesn't seem to be all that comfortable about it (even though it was HIS idea to take sai and naruto to the hotsprings back then...and don't tell me noone thought about the perverted double-meaning of that action XD)))
i loved that discovery you made about ninja's being attracted to the one's that feel a certain deal of annoyance or repulsion towards them...that is so true)))
i love the docile sai, the teasing sasuke bossing kakashi around and the said perverted copy-nin...can't wait to read how that bunch of konoha's horny shinobis would be corrupting the pure delicate yamato!!! XD)))
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sai's reasoning on why Tenten was his soul mate was very very funny.
I just love your stories. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I just love your stories. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you.
This is just the first chapter, and I'm already squirming. I just absolutely love cocksucking Sai, demanding Sasuke, perving Kakashi, and uncomfortable, fighting-his-urges Tenzou. Kakashi's seeming fascination with Sasuke (and Sasuke's fascination right back)is a little creepy, and a lot of HOT. I love the things Tenzou tries to do to stop thinking about the sexual goings-on happening all around him. Ha, and he thought Kakashi would give Sai good, clean, wholesome advice...
There are so many things I like about this, I just can't remember them all. ^_^ ...sexual intent! That concept is so hilarious to me. And God, when Sasuke said "Ssensssei..." at the end, my knees got all weak. Whew. I'm wondering how much more it's going to take to get Tenzou out of his bedroll. ^_^ We know he's more than a little interested in Sai, not to mention his idol Kakashi ('the gift of joining Kakashi's team... I loved how you phrased that!) no matter how far in denial he is.
I just really, really adore this. There is so much sexual tension building, building, and I can't wait to see it explode. ^_^
This is just the first chapter, and I'm already squirming. I just absolutely love cocksucking Sai, demanding Sasuke, perving Kakashi, and uncomfortable, fighting-his-urges Tenzou. Kakashi's seeming fascination with Sasuke (and Sasuke's fascination right back)is a little creepy, and a lot of HOT. I love the things Tenzou tries to do to stop thinking about the sexual goings-on happening all around him. Ha, and he thought Kakashi would give Sai good, clean, wholesome advice...
There are so many things I like about this, I just can't remember them all. ^_^ ...sexual intent! That concept is so hilarious to me. And God, when Sasuke said "Ssensssei..." at the end, my knees got all weak. Whew. I'm wondering how much more it's going to take to get Tenzou out of his bedroll. ^_^ We know he's more than a little interested in Sai, not to mention his idol Kakashi ('the gift of joining Kakashi's team... I loved how you phrased that!) no matter how far in denial he is.
I just really, really adore this. There is so much sexual tension building, building, and I can't wait to see it explode. ^_^
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August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Geeze. How do you do it? Every time you write smut, I'm on the edge of my seat, albeit rather stuck to it. XD
This is an awesome piece. I love the tension, and of course, Yamato... God... Yamato Kakashi.... Hooooooooooooowttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.....
This is an awesome piece. I love the tension, and of course, Yamato... God... Yamato Kakashi.... Hooooooooooooowttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt.....