rate_review Reviews

I thought it was great

Pretty good. Never would have imagined such a pairing myself, but liked it nonetheless.

Definitely interesting, Though this is my first time reading a fic on those two, Pretty job over all though.

I really don't see anything wrong with this fic. It is a very tender and romantic moment between Anko and Shizune. I loved the way that you did this fic and have to say that it was very cute at the end. 10/10

Nothing is wrong with this fanfic. I thought it was awesome. Please continue this story!

AWSOME!!! THE BEST ANKOxSHIZUNE FIC I HAVE EVER READ!!! AWSOME JOB...!

Well, damn...again i never thought i would read yuri...but your a pretty good yuri writer...

Honestly, you have good potential for a story here.

As for the review thing...you already know why there aren't any. People don't read AFF stories for the excellent literary content, they read it for the pron. If they wanted a compelling story, then FF.net is generally where they go.

Making a chapter basically asking for reviews won't get them on this site. You need to just write and the more you do (with more explicit content) the more reviews you'll get.

Seriously, check some of the more popular stories and look at their hit/review ratio. Most are just as bad as yours.