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October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now thats how you kill an Uchiha, brutal, bloody no mercy.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol the end was the funnyest part "to bad your gay" lol
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well done! I just loved it! Excellent story line. Death to Sasuke...I really dislike his character, so no big lose there. Hey, what about Shino? He needs love too! Okay, I really like Shino...or his dad...I am sick, I know. Anyway, awesome fic. Hope to read more of you!!
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect 10 out of 10. I love this fanfic. please right a sequal. I want to read more!!!!!!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It may be finished, but it's still a fantastic piece of erotic literature. Kudos!
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it and will not mind at all if you make a sequel.I will like to see want happen with chouji and ino.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I loved the way you made everything change but not dramtically so.. But when she was asleep did she talk in her sleep when Naruto had Sasuke in his hands or what... Now I see why Naruto and the other Jinchuriki's are always alone because of that one thing in their head is the fear of hurting the ones they love... I hope you do a sequel but if not you have a great ability here so don't lose it keep writing...
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice to see an end to this fic, and I would love to see a sequel! By the way, I think you are just suffering from perfectionist writer syndrome; I thought the last chapter was beutifull :-)
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and I could see why Naruto was depressed from killing Sasuke but thanks to Kakashi he got over it slowly but surely... If you had a connection with someone it would hurt like hell to kill that person...Please update soon
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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry the reviews late, but this was a great, and funny, chapter! Wish I could say more, but I"m a little pressed for time