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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke with Choji?? I just threw up a bit.
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is really... bizarre. it's like all the names were put in a bowl and picked at random to make the couples... kinda. we have the expected couples and then the 'whaaa?' couples. it's really bizarre... I really need to keep reading lol.
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, com-pli-cated! can't wait till we start getting some answers
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neat start ... please finish! I wanna know how got kidnapped (besides Naruto) and how the Leader is ... PLEEEEASE? and thanks! LOL
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude it's really good. I was a little confused by the way you tried to keep their identities a secret.... and the fact that you wouldn't say who shadow-man and his lover were.... very confusing... ne wayz, you did a really good job, I loved it! hope to see more from you soon! Ja ne.
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August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting I can't wait to see where this story is going.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a good beginning. I really want to know who was kidnapped. I'm thinking Neji and Naruto. Hope the next part is up soon.
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this looks like its gonna be a great fic. Neji and naruto, right? Is naruto neji' s love or someone else? I think that 'man' is neji "dead" father! *___* am i right? am i? huh? *is knocked out by irriated bystanders* UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! COOOKIES! I GIVE COOOOOOOOOOKIES!
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
REALLY GOOD START LET ME GUESS ITS NARUTO ANS SAUKE THAT GOT KIDNAPPED AND ITS NARUTOS FATHER AND MANDARA OR SASUKES FATHER??? BUT REALLY GOOD SO FAR CANT WAIT TO READ NEXT....