AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Hypnosis

by Saitochan

person MrSubWright
schedule August 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Story was hot as hell! It's August now and I certianly hope there are more chapters coming, I love how hypnosis is used to subtly to change the character's behaviors, I'd want to see how Tsunade was caught and of course more of the others. Hope you're still writing this and would love an update soon

person Red
schedule August 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Totally in love

 

Any guesses on the next pairings? 

 

I vote Shikamaru and Kurotsuchi <3

person Anonymous
schedule July 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I definitely enjoyed this. New crack pairing for Shikamaru lol.

person Fapman
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic to finally see an update. Hope this means that you will continue to update
person Mikey Boy
schedule February 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I hope he knocks her up!
person picajump
schedule July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really quite a fun fic, I do really like Shikamaru and hypnosis-with-limits is a perfect power for him!
I hope this continues, especially if he has to get sneaky and subtle; that is when he is at his coolest.
... Well ignoring the fact that he can control shadows, which is cool all of the time.

The guy who knows hypnosis creeps me out somewhat though, hope he sits in the background as a plot device...
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Unexpectedly, I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Shade
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, your story is very interesting and enjoyable. I'm looking forward to it.
person BlueRyuu
schedule October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
horrible author! XD having no lemons! lol, what happened to the less plot?? not that im complaining, this is really entertaining XD
person Crystal
schedule October 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll admit its getting interesting i'll check up on this from time to time to see if you have updated. You are a good writer although the first chapter was a little boring and i almost stopped reading but it got good quickly, and im interested now. Keep up the good work and I wish you luck in making this good. ^^